This is part two in a four-part series on story structure. You can read part one here. To learn more about story structure, be sure to sign up to receive a free copy of the eBook, How To Write Better Stories.
There’s a moment in every story (or at least there should be!) where the protagonist is heading in one direction…and then everything changes.
New information has entered the picture. There’s been a “parting of the curtain” (in Larry Brooks speak). Suddenly things aren’t what they seemed even a moment before.
Now that’s powerful. And it’s also the job of this next piece of story structure: the Midpoint.
The Midpoint is a plot point that happens smack-dab in the middle of the story, at the 50 percent mark. It introduces new and vital information–and it’s also the moment that shifts the context of the story.
It’s the catalyst that takes your protagonist from part two of the story (where he’s in “reaction mode”) to part three of the story, where he’s ready to start attacking.
Again, just like the First Plot Point, Larry Brooks, bestselling author of Story Engineering, has written a very detailed post about the Midpoint and what it’s all about. So head on over to his site, StoryFix.com, and read:
Then come back here for some Midpoint examples.
Breaking Down the Midpoint: Two Examples
Examples are the best way to really wrap your head around this story milestone and the significance it plays in every great story. So here are two Midpoint examples from movies:
The Sweetest Thing
In this movie we meet Christina (the protagonist), a party girl who just wants to have fun. Her and her friends are partying at a club one night when she meets Peter, a handsome real estate agent. At first they don’t get along, but then as the night progresses we see them getting to know and like each other.
Then we find out Peter is at the club celebrating a bachelor party for his brother, who’s getting married that weekend in Somerset.
The Midpoint happens after Christina and her friend arrive in Somerset where they’ve secretly followed Peter. They sneak into the church–late–for the wedding. They figure they’ll hang out, watch the ceremony and then find Peter at the reception.
But the context of the entire movie is shifted at the Midpoint–when we find out it’s actually Peter’s wedding.
Before this moment the story was heading down one path, but now it’s on a completely different path. That’s what the Midpoint does.What About Bob?
In this movie we meet Dr. Marvin, an up-and-coming psychologist who has a new book out. Things are going well for him, until he gets introduced to a new patient named Bob.
Suddenly Bob has started showing up everywhere, including on Dr. Marvin’s family vacation, driving him nuts!
The Midpoint happens when Dr. Marvin has his Good Morning America interview–Bob pretty much takes over the interview and ruins everything.
After that moment, we see the Doctor shift into part three of the story, which is “attack mode.”
Without a Midpoint in place to shift your story, you won’t have the catalyst needed to push your protagonist from being a “wanderer” to being a “warrior” (more on this soon).
But that’s not the last stop on the plot point trail. There’s still one more major milestone that has to happen in your story (plus two smaller milestones that need to occur). Up next in this series: Pinch Points, what they are and how to use them.
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Image of Bill Murray courtesy of Paul Sherwood
Image of Cameron Diaz courtesy of Ian
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