“Why won’t this draft work?!” I threw my notebook down in a fit of brattiness. I was on the third draft of a novel. My first novel. The one I wrote back in 2008.
I’d been writing it for months, and still nothing was going right. The story wouldn’t flow like it should, my heroine was a whiny, alchy mess, and the plot didn’t quite make sense. There were so many holes and I had no idea how to fix them.
I was in over my head. This draft, this story, was not working. I was finally ready to admit it.
Problem was, admitting didn’t change the fact that I’d spent close to a year writing and rewriting and rewriting a draft, just to still be sitting in a mess.
I had no idea what I was doing. I was ready to quit.
If you’ve written a first draft before, you know where I’m coming from. You know what it’s like to have a story feel not quite right or parts that don’t seem to fit. No matter how much you rework it.
Why Your Novel Won’t Work
Instead of quitting, I stopped working on my draft and took a short break. Immediately following that break, I had a breakthrough. I came across a website called StoryFix.com and an author named Larry Brooks. Brooks pulled no punches in talking about what it took to write a novel that “worked.”
A major thing I learned from him–from studying his teachings, his methods–was there are story “ideas” and there are story “concepts.”
Most novelists don’t have a “concept” when they start writing, they only have an “idea.” And that lack of concept is what turns their drafts into a hellish nightmare where they either rip all their hair out, quit or end up in a mental institution (OK–maybe not a mental institution, but the drafting process really can drive you NUTS!).
If you’ve experienced this before it’s because your story was only an “idea” when you started writing it, and not a full-blown “concept.”
It’s like you put the bread in the oven and baked it, but you never added any yeast or gave it time to rise (two essentials for baking bread).
You can’t write a strong first draft unless you’ve dug deep enough to have a concept for your novel. (And writing drafts based on “ideas” can kill your spirit–and your fiction career.)
So What’s The Difference?
Stories, at their core, are all about one thing: something happening.
It’s all well and good to have a story with a fancy theme, a cool setting and an amazing protagonist, but if nothing actually happens, your story’s a dud.
Think about when you tell stories to other people–what are they about 9 times out of 10? Something that happened! An action, a conflict.
THIS is what differentiates an “idea” from a “concept.”
An idea is often a seedling, such as a:
But that’s all there is. There’s nothing to elevate the seedling to the next level.
And while these seedlings are great and are completely needed, they don’t, alone, make a story work.
A concept is the stuff great novels are made from–a concept is a full-blown picture of a journey.
Every great story (of modern day writing) has a protagonist who has “something happen,” and then he’s forced (by the antagonist) to go on a journey in order to solve a problem/defeat the antagonist/get what he wants.
Idea Or Concept?
An “idea” becomes a “concept” when it has:
- A Character (Proagonist/Hero)
- A Goal (Something the Hero wants)
- A Motivation (The ‘why’ that’s driving what the Hero wants)
- A Conflict (The Antagonist, what’s standing in the Hero’s way of getting what he wants)
Here’s an elevator-pitch formula you can use to begin turning your idea seeds into a fully-sprouted story concept:
(Character) wants (Goal) because (Motivation), but (Conflict)
- Jack Dawson (Character) wants to get to America so he can start a new life (Goal) because he’s a street rat with nowhere else to go (Motivation), but little does he know the ship he’s on is headed for disaster (Conflict). (Titanic)
- Dr. Leo Marvin (Character) wants to enjoy his vacation and the success of his book (Goal) because he’s been working hard and has finally become a well-known psychologist (Motivation), but his newest patient, Bob Wiley, has plans of his own (Conflict). (What About Bob?)
This formula can help you take an idea seed and turn it into a full-blown concept.
Share With Us
Do you have an idea or a concept for your current novel? In the comments 1) Share your concept, OR 2) Using the formula above, turn your current idea seed into a concept and then share it with us.
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